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I recently decided to take a little break from my current Mid Grade WIP to work on a new idea. My new project is an early chapter book and I love, love, love, the idea so I decided to jump in with both feet.

 

Not quite an easy-to-read story and not nearly as difficult as a mid-grade chapter book, early chapter books provide an all important step in helping young readers become more independent.

Barbara Seuling in her book How to Write a Children’s Book and Get it Published states that early chapter books share these characteristics:

  1. Meatier stories- A step up from easy readers, but not quite as complex as a mid-grade novel
  2. Shorter chapters- Gives the child a sense of accomplishment
  3. Use everyday experiences for the basis of the stories
  4. Adults play a significant role in the life of the hero or heroine

Here are some of Ms. Seuling’s suggestions to help you in writing an early chapter book:

  1. Read several early chapter books- What is the idea that the story is based on? Who are the characters? What situations would a base a story on for seven to ten year olds?
  2. Choose one of the books you have read in step 1 and write a one sentence summary for each chapter. This will help you to see how the book it plotted and developed.

I am currently doing the suggestions and  rediscovering the joy of Judy Moody, Franny K. Stein, The Magic Tree house, and Captain Underpants (that Dav Pilkey is a genius). I am also in the process of discovering some new friends as I search book stores and ask which books sell and which don’t.

I’ll keep you posted as I continue on my trek.

Happy Writing,

Suzanne Santillan

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This week we are pleased to feature Deborah Halverson for our newest Author Spotlight. I met Deborah at our recent SCBWI Published Authors Brunch and was impressed by her knowledge and love of writing. Deborah is a highly talented author/editor and the mother of triplet boys (Yikes). She is truly an inspiration.

Author Bio:

Deborah Halverson is the author of Writing Young Adult Fiction For Dummies and founder of the writer’s advice website DearEditor.com. Deborah edited young adult and children’s fiction with Harcourt Children’s Books before picking up a pen to write the award-winning teen novels Honk If You Hate Me and Big Mouth . www.DeborahHalverson.com

Author Spotlight:

WOTS: What was your road to publication?

DH: I secretly wanted to be a published author since childhood—but I have a practical streak that convinced me the money was on the business side of publishing. (The accuracy of that is debatable in hindsight.) But that was my play. Armed with a BA in English and a copyediting certificate, I landed a job with an information publisher (think databases and catalogues) writing and editing video game instructions. My job required me to play video games, of course—not a bad gig if you can get it. But I wasn’t editing novels, and that’s the real game I wanted to play. I got my chance with Harcourt Brace Children’s Books in San Diego, my hometown. Imagine, working for a major trade publisher without moving to New York! At Harcourt, I learned how books are made in the managing editorial department and then moved over to developmental/acquisition editing. Finally, I was editing debut authors and bestselling veterans. Boy, did I love that job. Alas, when I became the mother of triplets boys, a full time office job was no longer tenable. That was about the time I decided that I needed to live that secret dream of mine or leave it. So, I sat down and started typing. When I stopped, I had a teen fiction manuscript called HONK IF YOU HATE ME and a two-book contract. I wrote the second book, BIG MOUTH, while my babies napped. My dream had become reality. I’ve kept my hand in the business side of publishing since then as a freelance editor, writing instructor, and speaker. My experience on both sides of the desk led to founding my writers advice website DearEditor.comand penning WRITING YOUNG ADULT FICTION FOR DUMMIES. I love that I get to combine all aspects of booklover me within a single cover that can, I hope, help other people realize their dreams, too.

WOTS: Can you tell me a bit about your writing process? Do you plot or not?

DH: I think outlining is The Bomb in the most awe-stricken, teen-age slang sense. The organization freak within me gets giddy at the thought of laying out my plot before I commit myself to the writing of several hundred pages. Alas, that “bomb” completely annihilates my creativity. I can’t write after I’ve outlined—and believe me, I’ve tried. Instead, I go into a project knowing certain benchmarks I want to hit in my story, and I usually have an end goal in mind, but otherwise I’m at the mercy of the ideas that pop up each writing session. Nonfiction like the For Dummies book works differently for me, though—for that, I outline, outline, outline.

WOTS: Are you working on any new projects that you can tell us about?

DH: I’m moving several fiction projects off of the backburner now that WYAFFD is published. It’s hard deciding which one I want to write more, but I figure that’s a good problem to have.

WOTS: Describe your studio or usual work space for us.

DH: For years I worked in a loft in my house, surrounded by bedrooms. My sons, who were infants and then toddlers during that time, napped or slept around me while I wrote, emitting the peaceful white noise that only sleeping children can emit. This summer, though, the boys—now six years old—commandeered the loft and turned it into a Lego playroom. They banished me to the kitchen table. Luckily, that table is just down the stairs from Lego Central, so I get to work with the peaceful white noise that only three six-year-olds playing with Legos can emit.

WOTS: What profession other than your own would you like to attempt?

DH: I’ve often wished I could be one of those TV characters who gets to jump into other people’s bodies. That way, I could spend an hour each week doing someone else’s job. Honestly, I’d love to know what it’s like to be a surgeon without spending a dozen years training—and without all that responsibility. I’d like to be President of the United States for an episode, without having to engage in politics for decades and then survive a campaign and then, criminy, have to solve the nation’s seemingly unsolvable problems. I just want to pop in and pop out. Perhaps it’s the writer in me, but I am very curious about what other peoples’ lives are like.

WOTS: What’s one thing that most people don’t know about you?

DH: I like noise. Scratch that: I love noise. Silence distracts me. When I want to concentrate, there’d better be music or little boy chatter or a full café around me. This ties into the other secret dream I’ve recently exposed to the light of day: to be a rock drummer. No, I’m not gunning for the latest Van Halen line-up. But I am taking drum lessons on a pink drum kit and loving every noisy minute of it. I can play the first minute and a half of Rumor Has It by Adele now—but a minute and a half is as far as I get before my boys race in with their own drumsticks and start banging away. Apparently they love noise, too.

WOTS: How do you juggle being a writer and the mom of triplet boys?

DH: I’ve tried all the tricks other mom/writers have tried, I’m sure. Ultimately, my strategies vary from month to month and year to year. When the boys were little, I pushed the triple stroller 4 miles in the morning and 4 miles in the afternoon. As I pushed, I thought of things to write and left voicemails for myself. In the middle of the day, when the boys napped, I retrieved those voicemails and went to town on my keyboard. I wrote BIG MOUTH in five months using that method. But now the boys are all in school and I have more regular work hours. Gotta say, that’s pretty darn swell. Well, except for the fact that the house is so very quiet with them away.

WOTS: Your newest book Writing Young Adult Fiction for Dummies is a departure from your previous work, was it difficult to make the transition from fiction to non fiction?

DH: I discovered that I love writing nonfiction. I get to outline exhaustively, but my creativity feels indulged because I challenge myself to find unusual, compelling ways to say otherwise dry things. For example, my first draft of the dialogue chapter in WYAFFD begin with me stating that strong dialogue is a key element of young adult fiction. That’s what my outline said to put there. Then I took my creativity out of the can. Now that chapter starts off with, “Talk may be cheap in the real world, but in young adult fiction, it’s made of gold, wrapped in C-notes, and sprinkled with diamonds with a bow on top.” My inspiration for fun nonfiction is the wonderful Bill Bryson. Anyone who can make statistics about stair climbing fun to read is a super star in my book.

WOTS: We here at Writing on the Sidewalk tend to procrastinate with our writing, where do you fit in Procrastinator or Proactive?

DH: I plan out my work calendar meticulously. (Organization freak, remember?) That doesn’t mean I always keep up with it . . . but my stress builds when I don’t move through the calendar as planned, so I’m mostly proactive. Not totally, but mostly.

WOTS: Thanks Deborah. 

If you would like to know more about Deborah be sure to visit  www.DeborahHalverson.com  and  www.DearEditor.com.

Deborah has graciously provided us with a Cheat Sheet from her book Writing Young Adult Fiction for Dummies, be sure to check out this valuable resource.

Happy Writing,

Suzanne Santillan

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  1. Worrying about my east coast friends and family. An earthquake, hurricane, and personal storms too. Sending love and prayers…
  2. The last two books I’ve read made me cry: Recovery Road by Blake Nelson and Sorta Like a Rockstar by Matthew Quick. Sometimes that’s just what I need.
  3. I saw The Help  movie last night – very true to the book. Hurray for the power of voice and stories!
  4. Teaching a class with Andrea Zimmerman feels like such a gift – teaching helps me learn. And A.Z. is so darn smart!
  5. Great white shark in San Diego! Hubby acting a little smug – he didn’t think we should go to the beach yesterday.

Happy weekend!

Sarah Wones Tomp

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Did anyone else watch The Glee Project?

My kids try to keep me hip, but there’s only so much they can do with what they’ve got. I’m always a bit late catching on to things – I didn’t get hooked on Glee until the second or third season – and I didn’t see the first half of The Glee Project season.

But half-way through I did get attached to the young actors trying to earn a role on the TV-show phenomenon and was eager to find out who won on the final episode.

There was an earlier episode where the head writer, Ryan Murphy, and all his co-hort powers were frustrated when Cameron decided to quit the show. He felt that he simply couldn’t compromise his personal (religious) beliefs and be willing to do anything asked of him. Oh how Ryan Murphy squirmed. He was already writing a story line for Cameron. He wanted this character on the show. To tell his story!

During the second to last episode they were supposed to cut one actor – but saved them all – so four finalists were left for the grand finale…

  • Lindsay: The girl with serious pipes who could get into some serious girl drama with Rachel
  • Damian: The cutie pie Irish boy who charms everyone
  • Samuel: Brooding poet artist type with some awesome white boy dreds
  • Alex: Cross-dressing diva with some personality issues

Each of these actors/performers are certainly talented and appealing. It had to come down to who would add to the story. Who would make the show interesting. Wellllll…

Everyone won!

Samuel and Damian will have guest roles for seven episodes while Lindsay and Alex will each have two. And I read that there is a possibility that each of the original twelve contestants may have cameos.

Right before they made their big announcement, I was watching Ryan Murphy and Ian Brennan (the creator of the show) – and the way too sweet guys who coached them all along – really truly rooting for each of the performers, and I turned to the girl child and said, “Everyone is just so nice.”

Ryan Murphy gave them each feedback – and though he was a little firm in earlier episodes – he gave such respectful and meaningful compliments. So incredibly sweet and thoughtful.

And then they couldn’t make a real choice anyway – no dreams were completely shattered.

But more than being nice, I think it really came down to the character potential. Once a character gets in your head – you want to tell their story!

For the record, the more competitive youngest boy was disgusted by the wimpiness of it all. He wanted one clear winner. Just saying.

(Cameron, Samuel, Lindsay, Alex)

Get your characters right!

Sarah Wones Tomp

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I just got home from taking the oldest boy back to school. My brain and heart are both full and empty, so I am going to turn this over to a new blog, WRITE AT YOUR OWN RISK, hosted by the Vermont College of Fine Arts faculty. Check it out!

I love the name and I love them.

And I swear I was going to post this week about grown-ups in picture books, but looks like Leda Schubert did that for me!

Enjoy the brilliance.

Sarah Wones Tomp

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Summer time = reading time.

So deliciously lovely to have time to read!

Despite all the books I’ve found – and the ones I still have to look forward to on my never-shrinking pile – I have a kind of longing going on.

I would so so love to read a new book by

  • Sara Lewis Holmes. I loved Operation Yes and have recommended it to loads of people for loads of different reasons. Time for a new one, please!
  • K.L. Going. I know the Fat Kid Rules the World movie is in progress, but I sure would love another novel too! I just reread Saint Iggy. Much love.
  • Markus Zusak. I’m sure there is all kind of pressure to follow The Book Thief, but I was a huge fan over I Am the Messenger and Fighting Ruben Wolfe. Eagerly waiting to be surprised!

I’m just saying…

I haven’t heard any rumblings of their new books on the horizon – if I’ve missed them, please let me know!

I certainly know that there are millions of reasons it can take awhile to get a new book out into the world – but thought I’d send out the wish and longing to help the books along in their journeys.

Sarah Wones Tomp

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My cousin Kim sent me this recipe for Snickerdoodle Cupcakes and I can’t wait to try it out. Since I’m allergic to chocolate, I love looking for new and interesting cinnamon flavored treats to eat. I’m a huge fan of snicker doodle cookies, so I think these just might be perfect. Thanks Kim.

Snickerdoodle Cupcakes

Ingredients:
Batter
1 1/2 cups butter, room temperature
2 1/2 cups granulated sugar
5 eggs
1 teaspoon pure vanilla extract
3/4 teaspoon no-color almond extract
3 cups all-purpose flour
3/4 teaspoon baking powder
1/4 teaspoon salt
1 cup milk

Filling
1 package (8 ounces) cream cheese, softened
1/2 cup confectioners’ sugar
1/2 teaspoon ground cinnamon
1/4 cup milk

Icing
3 tablespoons Meringue Powder
1/2 cup cold water
2 cups granulated sugar
1/4 cup corn syrup
1/2 cup water
(Yes, you need two different 1/2 cups of water)

Makes:
About 24 cupcakes.

Tools:
Standard muffin pan and an icing decorator with the filler tip if you have one; if not, they’re about $15 at Michael’s for the cheap one.

Instructions:
Step 1
Cupcake Directions
1. Preheat oven to 350°F.
2. In mixer bowl cream butter and sugar until light and fluffy.
3. Add eggs one at a time, mixing well after each addition.
4. Mix in vanilla and almond flavor.
5. Mix flour with baking powder and salt.
6. Add flour mixture alternately with milk, starting with the flour.
7. Pour into prepared pans.
8. Bake 20-25 minutes or until toothpick inserted comes out clean.
9. Cool 10 minutes in pan on rack; remove and cool completely before decorating.
Step 2
Filling Directions
1. In large bowl, combine cream cheese, sugar, cinnamon and milk.
2. Beat with mixer until well blended.
3. Refrigerate until ready to use.
4. Fill cupcakes. Refrigerate until ready to serve.

Step 3
Icing Directions
1. Beat meringue powder and 1/2 cup cold water until stiff, about 4 minutes..
2. In microwave safe bowl stir sugar, corn syrup and 1/2 cup water.
3. In microwave bring syrup mixture to a boil (approx. 5 minutes).
4. Remove, let mixture cool slightly (1-2 minutes).
5. Slowly add syrup to meringue mixture.
6. Beat on HIGH for 4 minutes.
For top of range: Mix sugar, corn syrup and water in 2 qt. saucepan. Bring to boil; cool slightly and follow directions above.

Step 3
Icing Directions
1. Beat meringue powder and 1/2 cup cold water until stiff, about 4 minutes..
2. In microwave safe bowl stir sugar, corn syrup and 1/2 cup water.
3. In microwave bring syrup mixture to a boil (approx. 5 minutes).
4. Remove, let mixture cool slightly (1-2 minutes).
5. Slowly add syrup to meringue mixture.
6. Beat on HIGH for 4 minutes.
For top of range: Mix sugar, corn syrup and water in 2 qt. saucepan. Bring to boil; cool slightly and follow directions above.

Step 4
Sprinkle cinnamon sugar on top of the icing for a traditional flavor

Suzanne Santillan

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Kathryn Stockett is familiar with rejection. In a recent article, Ms. Stockett shared her publication journey for her book, “The Help,” about African American maids working in white households in Jackson, Mississippi during the early 1960′s.

Ms. Stockett faced 60 rejections over the course of three and a half years before finding a home for her story. Her journey is a lesson in never giving up on your dream and trying even when things look their darkest.

Here is her reflection of one of her darker moments after her 40th rejection in which she received the following message: “There is no market for this kind of tiring writing.”

 …That was a hard weekend. I spent it in pajamas, slothing around that racetrack of self-pity—you know the one, from sofa to chair to bed to refrigerator, starting over again on the sofa. But I couldn’t let go of The Help. Call it tenacity, call it resolve or call it what my husband calls it: stubbornness.

But she didn’t give up and would go on to receive 20 more rejections before “The Help” would be published. A movie version of “The Help” was released in theaters last week and tied for No. 1 in the box office.

So what lessons can we take away from this experience? I would say that the biggest lesson that we take away from her story is that persistence pays off, and to never give up if you really believe in what you are doing, and that is important for everyone to remember.

Suzanne Santillan

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As an author I have discovered that you never know where your writing may take you. I have spoken at schools, book stores, libraries and school fund raisers, sharing my story and discussing writing with groups as small as two people and as large as 150 people. This past week I added two very different places to my expanding list: a Girl Scout day camp, and Juvenile Hall.

I shared the same message to each group and I discovered that, a girl, is a girl, is a girl, when you really love to read. Whether they were sitting at a beautiful park in Pasadena or in a secured facility with guards, the love of reading and books showed through.

“Tell Me a Story” was the theme for the Girl Scout camp where the girls ages 5-12 read stories, talked about writing, and wrote their own stories that would be published at the end of the week.

I shared with the girls that you need three things to be an author:

  1. Inspiration
  2. Perspiration
  3. Dedication

Using examples from my own experience with my picture book “Grandma’s Pear Tree” I was able to show the girls that using these three things you can accomplish your goals, no matter what your goal may be.

A few days later I was at Juvenile Hall sharing the exact same message, with a little twist, to a group of 13-18 year olds. I was able to show them samples of my rejection letters and told them how I moved on until I finally met my goal. These young ladies were bright, insightful and had some fabulous questions.

Did I make a difference with either group? I may never know, but if they ask me to speak again I will do it gladly because I saw a few sparks in some of their eyes and it made a difference to me.

Suzanne Santillan

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Next week the incredible Origami Yoda returns with a new book “Darth Paper Strikes Back.”

Here is the description of the book:

It is a dark time at Ralph McQuarrie Middle School. After suffering several Origami Yoda–related humiliations, Harvey manages to get Dwight suspended from school for being a “troublemaker.” Origami Yoda pleads with Tommy and Kellen to save Dwight by making a new case file—one that will show how Dwight’s presence benefits McQuarrie. With the help of their friends, Tommy and Kellen record cases such as “Origami Yoda and the Pre-eaten Wiener,” “Origami Yoda and the Exploding Pizza Bagels,” and “Origami Yoda and Wonderland: The Musical.” But Harvey and his Darth Paper puppet have a secret plan that could make Dwight’s suspension permanent . . .

Today we have the honor of interviewing the star of the new sequel Darth Paper, we have been warned that Mr. Paper can be somewhat touchy, so his co-star Origami Yoda has graciously agreed to sit in on the interview as well:

Thanks to Tom Angleberger for graciously helping with this interview.

Be sure to check out the newest Origami Yoda adventure  ”Darth Paper Strikes Back” on August 23rd.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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