Every writer needs a reader. Or, preferably, lots of them. Eventually.
Tonight my new class will be sharing work for the first time. This is always a bit nerve-wracking. For the authors, of course, but for me as the teacher/mediator also. Even though I have worked with most of my students in previous classes, I never know how a group is going to gel in a critique session.
There are no “right” or “wrong” answers in a workshop, but it’s so important to me that the authors get what they need. That they are given something that inspires them to keep chugging along, to work harder, to find joy in the process.
Some of my writer friends like to get feedback early and often as they draft. Others wait until they’ve reached a certain point before letting anyone else in. Just the other day a friend said to me, “I love the first draft because no one else will ever read it.”
At some point you have to let others read your work. And that can be terrifying. It’s impossible to predict or control how readers will react to your writing. But it’s also important to know what kind of reactions take root. One thing that helps me to gauge reactions is knowing where my reader is coming from. One of the best things about having a trusted critique group is that I know their pet peeves and inclinations already.
The best critiques are well-rounded and look at many aspects of the writing. But I’ve found that often times critiquers seem to have a certain focus. One element of the story always takes a bit of precedence.
Possible roles of readers:
- ENTERTAIN ME: This reader wants to be surprised. To be amused. To be able to play the movie in his/her head and to stay engaged. This reader notices the excess, the places the story wanders off the path.
- LOGIC POLICE: This reader wants everything to make sense. Credibility and plausibility is key. The events and actions have to work within the rules and limits of this particular world.
- DARE DEVIL: Make this reader worry! The stakes must be high and rising. The worse things are for your character, the happier this reader will be.
- ANGST-ADDICT: Looking for heartbreak and longing but joy and delight also. This reader wants to feel all the feels all the time.
- CRAFTSMAN: This reader wants the writing to be exquisite. Perfectly crafted sentences jump out and sing to this reader. But the awkward clunky ones stand out too. A fine tuner, looking for tight and just right writing.
- BETWEEN THE LINES: This reader sees the symbolism and metaphors. He/she will identify themes and layers of meaning – that you may not even know you included – and question certain choices based on the bigger picture.
In a perfect (book) world, all these readers are happy.
WRITING ON THE SIDEWALK
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I like to cut and paste. I don’t mean on my computer. I mean actual scissors and sticky stuff.
In preparation for a writing class I’m teaching (Writing for Children II at UCSD Extension), I spent some time yesterday cutting pictures of people from magazines. I find that visual cues can be powerful triggers for creativity. Images can help concretize–which is not a word, but it should be–the vague wandering of one’s mind. Pictures and objects can help make abstract ideas and characters take a more concrete form.
I know this. I plan to teach this. And yet, I hadn’t thought to do this for my current WIP, aka “the thing that will not be tamed.”
But in cruising through the magazines, all of a sudden I saw a girl and thought, “Hey! That’s X.” And then I saw a phrase that I needed. And a picture of a place I’d been trying to make my characters visit. It was so golly gee exciting. It made me feel like maybe, just maybe, this really is going to be a story some day.
So. Maybe I need to take my own class. Or at least take my own advice. Maybe it’s even time to make a vision box.
Here’s one I made while writing MY BEST EVERYTHING. It’s a simple one, but it helped me believe in the story along the way.
Vision box for My Best Everything
Some of things included:
- Moon images, of course
- Bottles, more of course
- Lulu’s fortune: You will travel far and wide
- A game wheel for Truth or Dare
- Moonshiner Tim
- “Even a spill can be beautiful”
- Car keys, with key chain that reads For I know the plans I have for you. ~Jeremiah 29:11
- A rosary
- Cowboy hat
- Sea shells
- Rusty junk car
- Gold coins
- A recipe for a science experiment involving yeast and flying grapes
See it. Believe it.
WRITING ON THE SIDEWALK
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I knew from an early age that my boys were not going to follow the typical path. Instead of baseball and soccer they preferred taking things apart and computers. And occasionally, they would even take apart my computer, until I put my foot down. People in our neighborhood soon became aware of my gadget boys and would show up at the door with broken electrical items for them to dismantle and dissect.
Once it became abundantly clear that this was their path, I tried to prepare them for a world that seem to give more respect to individuals who could throw or catch a ball rather than reprogram your microwave. To keep the junk to a minimum, I placed large plastic bins under their beds to hold the nuts, bolts, screws, and bits of old equipment that gadget boys tend to gather. I began reading them biographies of people like Edison, Einstein, Jobs, and Gates who didn’t fit the common mold. But it wasn’t always an easy path.
Son #2 discovered robotics during his high school years and that has been a tremendous outlet for him. As a parent, it was wonderful to see my son gathered with hundreds of like-minded kids for competitions.
I ran across this video filmed at the Denver Comic Con of actor Wil Wheaton responding to a question by a young girl on how to deal with being called a nerd. I thought is was very wise and touching and if I had this video when my boys were younger, you can be sure I would have played it for them.
It’s not always easy taking a different path. Today because of men like Steve Jobs and Bill Gates being a nerd isn’t as bad as it was in the past. With the advent of computers and computer technology people are more open to accept those who are more technology oriented.
The gadget boys are grown now. But if you were to ask them, I think they would agree with what Wil Wheaton has to say it does get better as you get older.
Writing on the Sidewalk
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Today is the first day you can vote for the SCBWI Crystal Kite Awards for your geographic area. Throw some love and support to local authors! It’s going to be tough pickings here in California!
Last weekend I attended the fantastic Writer’s Day Conference put on by the Los Angeles chapter of SCBWI. So many smart, creative, nice people under one roof!
Katherine Applegate started the morning off with a keynote speech including a hilarious biographical film narrating the history of her and her husband, Michael Grant’s rise to literary success. They poked fun at themselves but it was such a wonderful peek at what it means to be a real working writer. Her talk was exactly what I needed–full of truth and practicality as well as inspiration. I didn’t write down her exact words but I loved what she said about stories being able to both break and mend hearts.
Catherine Linka, bookseller and author of the upcoming novel, A Girl Called Fearless, shared tips on what every writer should know about retail book buying. There were way too many gems to post, but I think she was right on in her reading recommendations. Basically, read what you want to write! And read a LOT: 100 picture books, 75 middle grade novels or 1 YA per week.
Heidi Fiedler shared the book maps she makes when developing and editing books for Teacher Created Materials. She said readers are like archaeologists picking up clues along the way. Love that!
Agent Danielle Smith (newly) of Red Fox Literary gave a moving talk about readers who need our stories.
One idea from Martha Alderson, aka The Plot Whisperer that I found especially interesting was the idea that the middle of a story is the “exotic world” where the antagonists are in charge. I also attended her Plot Intensive the next day–as a plot convert, I highly recommend her books.
And, finally, I just gotta say, the gracious and pleasant Lee Wind is one excellent reader! He read from the first pages and just made everything sound better.
SCBWI truly is an amazing organization fueled by passionate and dedicated volunteers. I am so grateful I found them at the beginning of my writing journey!
WRITING ON THE SIDEWALK
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There’s been a lot of celebrating here at Casa de Santillan. Son #2 turned 18 and my husband and I just celebrated our 24th wedding anniversary. While searching for cake recipes to help celebrate these milestones I ran across this recipe for Watermelon Cupcakes on the bakerette.com site. I thought these adorable cupcakes would be perfect for a spring or summer birthday celebration and decided to share with our readers.
Photo courtesy of bakerette.com
Recipe type: Dessert
- 2 2/3 cups all-purpose flour
- 1 cup sugar
- 1 teaspoon baking powder
- 1/2 teaspoon salt
- 1 cup milk
- 1/2 cup water
- 1/2 cup oil
- 2 eggs
- 1 tablespoons vanilla
- 1/2 cup mini chocolate chips
- Food coloring
- Preheat oven to 350 degrees F. Line cupcake tins with cupcake liners.
- Mix together the flour, sugar, baking powder, and salt. Set aside.
- In a separate bowl, beat together the milk, water, oil, eggs, and vanilla with an electric beater on medium speed.
- Add food coloring to make a pink watermelon color. I used red food coloring with a small amount of yellow.
- Fold in chocolate chips and pour batter into prepared cupcake tins about 1/2 to 2/3 full.
- Bake for 20-23 minutes. Allow to cool completely using your favorite buttercream frosting. Add green food coloring to the frosting.
Be sure to check out the other crafts and recipes on bakerette.com.
Writing on the Sidewalk
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Here’s a little heads up for our readers. To celebrate finishing the final draft of her new craft book,Writing and Selling New Adult Fiction, DearEditor.com is giving away a FREE EDIT of a full fiction manuscript. Entry deadline: March 22, 2014. See DearEditor.com for details.
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